Seeing as I'm the 23rd person to download this and no one has replied, I felt I better say, nice work! I'm not familiar with Carnaval, but it certainly sounds excellent to me!
Thanks a lot, guys. I'm glad you liked it. @piano121 No, I haven't listened to Freire, but I'm actively trying to find it. It's really hard to get CDs where I live, and shipping rates are so high, if you buy it on the internet.
You definately have the notes all sorted out in your head, however the only thing I thought it was lacking was a bit of elasticity in your playing... You almost play everything as if there was a silent metronome in your head...
Relax and be patient with the piece... give some notes the patience they desire and let them linger. Let yourself go and let the piece ooze out... not jump out and try and get away as fast as it can.