Work in progress, Mozart Sonat D major KV. 311

[kuwait]

Hi!

Now in this recording theres a flew misshaps   I've only playing for a couple of years so it cant be really good yet. i'll be happy for any advice!!

[tocca]

You're on the right track in my view, some more practise so it is more ingrained in your fingers and it will be real nice.
A couple of things:
Firstly, you miss the rytm on some places where there's a drill (a turn i think it's called, thoose things) for example in bar 22 and 23 (about 55sec into the recording and again at about 3min20).
You stop in the left hand to wait for the drill to finish and miss the rytm there.

Sometimes you play lightly and nice, but othertimes you are to heavy for my taste. In my view this Sonata should be played lightly almost playfully. Don't need to be faster, but more... joyful so to speak.

Keep at it, it's a good bit on the way to something good.

[zheer]

That was really cool,  you have a nice touch, and this sonata is really nice.
I would like to know what piano you are playing on, it sounds really nice and bright . Is it a YAMAHA.

    I might be wrong, but it seems that you are finding it hard to concentrate, because you have moments where you stop and repeat bars, like you are having to re-read something cause you didnt understand it the first time round. If thats the case i can suggest a few things ( please dont take it the wrong way )

   ( 1 ) Play it from memory


   ( 2 ) Play it at a really slow tempo, for example at 30 crotchet beats per minut a few times.

   ( 3 ) Listen to your own recording, and color in those bars where you make an error, and work on them.


   ( 4 ) Listen to a CD of this sonata, and try and learn from them.


   Good luck