Grade 1 piece

[keyboard kitty]

This is Andante from the ABRSM selected piano exam pieces. It's on a keyboard, and the sound is very muffled- but I hope it's ok?
I was wondering about what mark would I get for this? And what can be improved.
Thank you 
http://www.youtube.com/v/yKVxHhGZiug&rel=1

[lostinidlewonder]

Notes where right, but the long sustained notes simply do not work on this electric keyboard and thus if you sounded like this on a real piano in exam you would lose marks.

[shortyshort]

My Step-daughter played this piece for her Grade 1, last year. 

Yours sounded very controlled. 

I think "lostinidlewonder" is right about the quality of instrument, but we can't all afford real pianos. 

I thought it sounded very good.