Oke, let’s give it a try!
Andante
I feel that the balance between the chords and the melody is a challenge in this piece , and you have done a great job at this point!
I like the atmosphere too!
I feel there’s one problem, that’s keeping the tempo! You use so much rubato that I cannot feel a main tempo anymore….!
Some details:
Bar 19: I hear a “gap” (suddenly it’s pp ;-)) in the middle… I had the same problem, my teacher told me to use my wrists more.
Bar 1: I don’t know if it’s the piano.. but what I hear is an accent instead of a crescendo/decrescendo.
FF passages: sometimes a bit soft..
Presto
The theme sounds lovely

, makes me jealous

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Bar 45 You clearly have a little bit a problem with the trill…. How to solve ?
1. listen to 1,3,4,6 of the left hand.
2. Practise g - f sharp trill..
3. practise with a moving wrist.. (high- low)
But concentrating on the left hand will help the most I think :-)
Bar 64-65 you play decrescendo instead of crescendo.. and keep up the tempo please!
Con anima:
In the beginning the balance gets a bit less nice.. further I like it!
From 82: You suddenly play this slower..
91 and further: keep feeling the bass notes! Soprano is nice :-)
125 and on: Rhythmically nice! Don't forget to listen to the “melodical element” in the bass.
154: I’m not really into the crescendo you make in the second half.. I cannot hear the first beat. Furter, well done!
193 : don’t forget the rest in the left hand!
211 and on: why so slow?


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From the chord passage: I would suggest to practise this with the hands staying at the keys (small movements).. but with every 3 notes, in the left hand, a bigger movement.
Overall: very nice

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