I think you would benefit from some more slow practice. Your actual performance tempo is a bit fast considering your level of musical control. You play with lots of passion, I can tell. But the passion could be more skillfully woven into the performance.
Hi everyone!OK... Please, consider that I've studied the 3rd movement for only about three weeks... I know it's not good, and I know there are a lot of much better performances, but I'm not a very gifted musician...I'm sure it's not as good as someone would expect for it, but at least I tried my best, and I want constructive feedback so that I may improve this piece.Oh, and sorry about the sound - the recorder wasn't the best one as well.Any suggestion? What did you think about my playing? (Please, sincerity! )
You play it too fast and are losing articulation in some partsThe are a few spots where the rhythm is lost and it is very distractingDynamics and feeling are very good but could be better if the notes are more clear rather than fast
I guess it's alright for a few weeks. Still. I'd rather hear something of a bit higher quality that you worked a year on.
Thanks for the answer!Yes, perhaps I'll record another piece wherein I'm more confident. (:But, anyway, thank you!