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Topic: Unending Lullaby - original piano piece  (Read 1119 times)

Offline sergeidave

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Unending Lullaby - original piano piece
on: October 01, 2016, 08:53:25 PM
Hi guys,

Here I am again, with a new composition for the piano. Please check it out if you have a minute or two and let me know what you think!



Thank you very much!
-- David

Offline josh93248

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Re: Unending Lullaby - original piano piece
Reply #1 on: October 10, 2016, 11:35:39 AM
Okay, it's certainly not bad, not bad at all, just completely not my style.

To my ears and tastes it sounds overly sweet and a bit trite.

However I decided to look at the Lacrimoso Waltz too. It's better, it has a few similar issues but to me it has more interest and expression within it.

Anyway, I wouldn't give up, see what you can attract, this may not be the most receptive environment for what you want to do but you never know, you might find a few people here appreciative.
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Offline sergeidave

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Re: Unending Lullaby - original piano piece
Reply #2 on: October 14, 2016, 06:28:02 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback, Josh! I appreciate it greatly!

I absolutely do not want to be a pest, so I'll probably stop posting my compositions in this forum. However, whenever I get some time to record a classical piece performance, I will absolutely ask for some feedback here!

Thanks!
-- David
 

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