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Piano Board => Audition Room => Topic started by: aewanko on September 13, 2008, 04:48:52 AM
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No. 2: Langsam
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Sorry to say but this is not played correctly, mainly you have not worked out the rhythm. Some wrong notes too. Make a rhythmical analysis and correct your reading errors.
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Wrong notes? I recorded this with the sheet in front of me. I guess I was right after all, I'm loaded with mistakes. Anyone who I talk or touch will be infected. Hah, wrong notes....Get out will you?
But you are right about rhythm. I was hurrying that moment.
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M 1: there are two eighth rests on count 3+ and count 4. M. 2: you skip the quarter rest on count 1. When the right hand comes in you slow down without reason. M.3: right hand should be legato. M.4:you should keep the first tied eight note longer. The two following eighths should be legato. M. 5: right hand has a sixteenth, not a quarter or eighth note, this arpeggio is definitely too expanded. And there is no arpeggio sign in the left hand. Left hand has a quarter on count 1+ which should be kept longer. The quarter rest on count 3 is too short. M. 6: second third is A/ C# not A/ C natural. I don't hear the right hand b/d half note on count 3-4 M. 7: you simply skip the third G/B on count 1+. Last measure: you should keep the left hand third G/B
Well and then there are dynamics but it seems these are a bit difficult to realise on your e-piano. All the thirds should be precisely played together which is not always the case.
*puts glasses off and moves out of grumpy-critical-piano teacher-corner*
don't feel offended, I know these pieces are quite delicate to play.
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Sorry to say but this is not played correctly, mainly you have not worked out the rhythm. Some wrong notes too. Make a rhythmical analysis and correct your reading errors.
Yes :)
You play this very expressively, I like what you do with it now do it in time. :)
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M 1: there are two eighth rests on count 3+ and count 4. M. 2: you skip the quarter rest on count 1. When the right hand comes in you slow down without reason. M.3: right hand should be legato. M.4:you should keep the first tied eight note longer. The two following eighths should be legato. M. 5: right hand has a sixteenth, not a quarter or eighth note, this arpeggio is definitely too expanded. And there is no arpeggio sign in the left hand. Left hand has a quarter on count 1+ which should be kept longer. The quarter rest on count 3 is too short. M. 6: second third is A/ C# not A/ C natural. I don't hear the right hand b/d half note on count 3-4 M. 7: you simply skip the third G/B on count 1+. Last measure: you should keep the left hand third G/B
Well and then there are dynamics but it seems these are a bit difficult to realise on your e-piano. All the thirds should be precisely played together which is not always the case.
*puts glasses off and moves out of grumpy-critical-piano teacher-corner*
don't feel offended, I know these pieces are quite delicate to play.
Hmm? I don't remeber skipping notes. My performance is bad because I am often anxious when recording. Sorry for the other post earlier. :-X I'm doomed.
Yes :)
You play this very expressively, I like what you do with it now do it in time. :)
Thank you but it was horrible, especially since it was recorded on a cheap digital.
By the way, this is probably the only recording that has comments. That means I (Es U See Kay) or horrible, horrendous, terrible, ugly and all other words related to it.