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Title: Original Ragtime Piece
Post by: pianoman666 on July 14, 2009, 04:31:58 AM

two-step ragtime, written July 13, 2009. please tell me what you think.

Title: Re: Original Ragtime Piece
Post by: makeanote on July 14, 2009, 10:32:41 PM

Hi there pianoman!

You follow the style of a ragtime piece quite well after the introduction - although there wasn't much of your piece posted. It would be good to listen to this being played on a real piano by a pianist instead of the sequenced / quantised version. Also, from a compositional point of view, the introduction was quite weak and I didn't think the chromatic run-down helped (check the intervals you use).

I trust this helps.
Ian