Piano Forum
Piano Board => Audition Room => Topic started by: demimondegirl on February 20, 2014, 08:40:06 AM
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The ending is hasty (I just finished this in one night), but I thought I'd put it up as a draft.
Tell me what you think!
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I fixed the ending a bit (made it longer).
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Very good indeed Kay. The groupings into five and the distribution of the accents give this piece real power and charm worthy of many hearings. If this is a one night knock-off I find myself wondering what you could do if you brought lasting concentration to bear. Then again, there is a strong case for spontaneity in the creative process. Do you improvise frequently ?
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I do. This is my first attempt for which pianistic-ness was a primary concern. This one fits the mittens nicely, and is quite playable. Thanks!
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You're obviously very talented and I enjoyed your Etude very much. However, to me, it sounded much more like Brahms than Scriabine. Looking forward to any future compositions you care to share.
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;D
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It reminds me of the spirit of Scriabin's tumultuous early Piano Sonata in E-flat minor. I'll play it if you send it to me. 8)
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Yay! Cool.
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Scriabin is one of my favorites. But I agree with philolog, sounds more Brahms-esque then Scriabin. But thats not a bad thing ;D! This is really great though, I like the "see-saw" effect between R and L hands. If I had one critique it would be to take more risks harmonically.
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Thanks, PG!