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Title: Romanze in A-flat (sketch) Original Composition Video
Post by: alistaircrane4 on July 06, 2014, 07:24:27 AM

piece is still unfinished but I feel like it will turn out to be a good one. Give your thoughts and constructive criticisms

Title: Re: Romanze in A-flat (sketch) Original Composition Video
Post by: awesom_o on July 12, 2014, 04:09:40 PM

For me, you relied a little too heavily harmonically on the relationship between Ab major and F minor, and the runs in the right hand were too 'noodle-y' to offer much in the way of  development.

I think you should try to develop your style to be more structurally concise, more harmonically adventurous, and ultimately, more individual.