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Piano Board => Audition Room => Topic started by: david456103 on October 16, 2014, 12:34:14 AM

Title: Some Bach! :)
Post by: david456103 on October 16, 2014, 12:34:14 AM

This is yet another piece I'm submitting for college supplements. Feedback/comments is welcome!

Title: Re: Some Bach! :)
Post by: hardy_practice on October 16, 2014, 05:50:56 AM

Try marking some cadences in the prelude.  You do it at :48 (the coda).

Title: Re: Some Bach! :)
Post by: hardy_practice on October 18, 2014, 07:20:57 AM

Now I've had a chance to look,  the notes of (what I think is) the most important tune in the Prelude aren't always coming out.    The higher D# seems covered up by the semi-quavers that follow and the following C#is the end of that phrase so maybe should be quieter than the D#?  In Bach I find the longer the note, the more important.
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