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Title: My own composition
Post by: pianorr on June 17, 2015, 01:35:01 PM

Hello,

I try to create music recently... If you have an advice to give me, go ahead ! This is very precious for me  :)

If you liked my composition, please also tell me !  :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pbYHB_eBhMw (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pbYHB_eBhMw)

Thank you.

Title: Re: My own composition
Post by: stevensk on June 17, 2015, 01:51:25 PM

Nice! But here are my thoughts.

1) Hold the steady beat!
2) The piece is very predictable and shallow. Change some of the chords to make it more interesting
3) Change the background photo. Use one whith yourself sitting deep and thoughtful in black and white. THAT will impress!  ;)

Title: Re: My own composition
Post by: pianorr on June 17, 2015, 02:15:38 PM

Thank you very much for your advices  :)

That's true that I have some problems with rythm... I will try working with a metronom !
And you're right, the music is pretty predictable. Do you have any idea to prevent that ? Changing chords is a good idea since the ones in this composition are the same along the song.

Thank you again  :)