AdagioCantabile (Original composition) ---G Sharp

[franz_dwarak]

Hi All,
My second piece but actually I expanded my first impromptu with some more harmonic and melodic Ideas based on some comments here...

You can listen at  https://savefile.com/files/3212057

Lemme know what u think...Any comments appreciated... 

Thanks

[Derek]

hi franz, sounds like you're well on your way to developing a solid improvisational vocabulary. This fascinates me because the first scale I began improvising in was also G# minor. 

Anyway all I would say is keep expanding your vocabulary with new ways of playing scales...no need to limit yourslef to G# minor, either.  I love some of the pedal-point ideas, very dark and creepy..
anyway this shows a lot of promise I can hear a strong sense of melody in this piece. keep it up!

[franz_dwarak]

hi franz, sounds like you're well on your way to developing a solid improvisational vocabulary. This fascinates me because the first scale I began improvising in was also G# minor. 

Anyway all I would say is keep expanding your vocabulary with new ways of playing scales...no need to limit yourslef to G# minor, either.  I love some of the pedal-point ideas, very dark and creepy..
anyway this shows a lot of promise I can hear a strong sense of melody in this piece. keep it up!

Thanks Derek. Appreciate ur comments and input.