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Topic: Smokey-ish jazzy blues piece  (Read 2942 times)

Offline coca cola veins

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Smokey-ish jazzy blues piece
on: December 07, 2006, 04:58:20 PM
I've got to be honest here, this improvisation is actually rather dull, manly resolving around a steady i - VII - VI - v/V progression with some random melody lines above it. Very... cliché. Therefore I will ask you for feedback (if I get any this time :( ) purely concerning the actuall playing - i.e - what is the first thing a experienced piano player like yourself ( ;) ) would do better, or if you like, what part of my playing stinks (the most...)?

I've been playing for 7-8 month without a teacher (I really can't get one right now) and thats why your feedback would be so much appreciated, since all feedback I ever get is from piano hating Oasis fans... If you now what I'm saying. ;) I have never once been given any real, constructive feedback in my life.  :'(

And as you will hear, it's not a piano being recorded but a 61 key keyboard through a free soundfont, hope you don't mind. And if you notice some awkward moments of silence in the piece its because I don't have a pedal.

Very well, enjoy, i guess.  :)
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