The tempo is very good however you fail badly in creating the true character of this music. Has to be more dreamy, more atmospheric.
I have never been able to play this Etude. It could be a lack of determination, but I have always found it horribly awkward. Something always breaks down.
I agree that the etude has to be more dreamy, atmospheric, as you put it, and I'm aware there are some places where notes are not together, other problems, but as a teacher I am also aware that the notes are there, and I feel that if I could play it that well, which I can't, I could get the rest, over time, by slowing down the tempo a bit, practicing sections, returning to it every few months, then gradually adding the other missing things.
I won't upload anything here until I think it is finished or as close to finished as I can get, but I'm 57 years old and don't want to put myself on the line, showing what I have not yet mastered.
But in my opinion this place, the Audition Room, is not only for people who are polished performers or even very advanced students. It's also a place to "try things out". I think this etude, by the same player, could be very fine within 5 years, maybe in less time, so I have to look at things differently. Some of the sections seemed nailed, technically, at full speed. That's a good start, to me. The sections that weren't quite right were not totally off the mark, so it's not a matter of going back and completely fixing something that can't work.
Finally, in my opinion, a very mechanical, technical attempt at a mastery of an etude is not necessarily a bad way to go about it, so long as there is not something very, very wrong technically. If the fingering is right, if the notes are there, the rest may and often does come later.
I often practice sections for a very long time deliberately ignoring anything musical that is not going to cause a technical problem later.
Again, it's not my way to show anything until I think I have it mastered, but I am overly self-cirtical and extremely shy. I think there is room here for people showing where they are at, now, and I'm glad you seem to have made your comments with that in mind.

Gary