While this is much more tolerable, you still need to be more careful with your articulation in the Prelude -- you're playing EVERY note staccato, with the exception of the arbitrary 2-note slur that I really can't tell if you're doing it on purpose or not. Suggestion... try and play the 16th notes legato and the 8th notes in an almost staccato fashion, but not actually staccato -- more like a non-legato.
Watch the tempo in the Fugue... needs more consistency.
Well, yes, maybe. I know I play the 16th notes too staccato sometimes, but most of the time it would just get blurred if played legato (at least in the school's chamber..) Note that there's practically no echo in my recordings (recorded in a small room with a bad mic) if I haven't added it.That's been a problem for a very long time. From the beginning, actually. And it's a problem with most of the pieces I play.