That's a digital piano, right?
The part starting 5:11 was the hardest for me to get off clearly, but it just takes a lot of good wrist rotation and slow practice.
Sometimes this recording sounds as if it was recorded slow and then sped up, is this the case?
You should make more out of the big chord at 6:09, since it's supposed to be a surprise.
and the tempo fluctuated occasionally.
you need to use a lot more rubato.
Pedaling never sounds right on digital pianos so I can't comment on that.
Will you be doing the remaining movements?
It may sound weird of course. Blame my old mic for that. The only "unreal" thing I did was some computer manipulation with volume
So what's the right thing to do?