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Offline katiel

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Prelude in F
on: May 23, 2006, 10:27:52 PM
Hi, this is my first real composition that is "finished," I have many more, but just not completed. 

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I usually don't write in this style (classical or baroque) but I thought I would give it a try.

I started this piece yesterday and finished it today.  I do not have any recording devices, so this is a midi (sorry).





Offline allthumbs

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Re: Prelude in F
Reply #1 on: May 24, 2006, 12:37:00 AM

You need to attach your file.
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Offline katiel

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Re: Prelude in F
Reply #2 on: May 24, 2006, 02:15:16 AM
Sorry I was in a rush to go to dinner, it should be up now.

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Re: Prelude in F
Reply #3 on: May 25, 2006, 12:21:04 AM
40 views and no reply  :'( :-[

I know its not the best, but I just started composing and I am 14.

Offline tompilk

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Re: Prelude in F
Reply #4 on: May 25, 2006, 02:01:07 PM
40 views and no reply  :'( :-[

I know its not the best, but I just started composing and I am 14.
nice.. i dont like classical as much as the romantics... so i cant really comment on anything.. but i found it enjoyable... maybe a bit repetetive and maybe in need of another theme or two...
Tom
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Re: Prelude in F
Reply #5 on: May 25, 2006, 11:49:38 PM
Wow, you are only 14?  I thought you did very well! 

I agree, try more variation, as it's repetitive.  I would like to hear less repeated accompaniment chords--Maybe go for Classical style and use Alberti bass instead of block chords, or arpeggiate them in places. 

Keep composing!

Teresa
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