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katiel

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Hi, this is my first real composition that is "finished," I have many more, but just not completed.

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I usually don't write in this style (classical or baroque) but I thought I would give it a try.

I started this piece yesterday and finished it today. I do not have any recording devices, so this is a midi (sorry).

Prelude in F.mid (18.61 kB - downloaded 75 times.)

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allthumbs

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Re: Prelude in F

Reply #1 on: May 24, 2006, 12:37:00 AM

You need to attach your file.

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katiel

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Re: Prelude in F

Reply #2 on: May 24, 2006, 02:15:16 AM

Sorry I was in a rush to go to dinner, it should be up now.

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katiel

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Re: Prelude in F

Reply #3 on: May 25, 2006, 12:21:04 AM

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I know its not the best, but I just started composing and I am 14.

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tompilk

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Re: Prelude in F

Reply #4 on: May 25, 2006, 02:01:07 PM

Quote from: katiel on May 25, 2006, 12:21:04 AM

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I know its not the best, but I just started composing and I am 14.

nice.. i dont like classical as much as the romantics... so i cant really comment on anything.. but i found it enjoyable... maybe a bit repetetive and maybe in need of another theme or two...
Tom

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teresa_b

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Re: Prelude in F

Reply #5 on: May 25, 2006, 11:49:38 PM

Wow, you are only 14? I thought you did very well!

I agree, try more variation, as it's repetitive. I would like to hear less repeated accompaniment chords--Maybe go for Classical style and use Alberti bass instead of block chords, or arpeggiate them in places.

Keep composing!

Teresa

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