I really was afraid that some sections may sound too bashy or hard.
Hi, i really enjoyed listening to this. The first 5 minutes were sort of difficult to listen to, because i felt there was not enough momentum. I think you lingered slightly too much on the fiddly bits, but i enjoyed the way you play the theme and bring it back in. Your build up from about 6 minutes onwards is where my attention was more drawn in. I think you built this up nicely, however at 7:40, you start losing the momentum. I know this part of the passage is tough, but you really need to slog it out there and just go for it. At around 8:35 where that melody in the bass line comes out, it was good but you can really pump out that first chord and then sound out the melody even more. I think you made the climax and the fall after it at 11 - 12 mins very nice, solid with great colour. But i got a bit lost at around 12:10. That part just needs to be kept moving a bit. 12:30 to the end was very good.Gruff