. But I don't understand, why you play the first bars of this piece (and some other parts as well) that slow and static?
, so imagine you have a listener next to you next time you record and be a little kinder with your volume to our ears !.
Hi zheer,, you might want to work more on the dynamic shadings and contrasts, develop more of an ebb and flow to the phrasing, give more attention to nuances, and bring more clarity to your pedaling.
...move your hands more, make it seem like it's effortless. that's how this piece is supposed to sound.