Wow, that is dark... But you know what?I LOVE IT!I really like the way you built it up right around 2:45 and 9:30, I live for music like that! I don't think it is too long at all, it really draws you in, and makes gasp for air at a couple points... Great intro, at several points it sounds like, well, flowing water, dark water... MWHAHAHA *cough*Improv?!?!?! Even more impressive! Please post the rest of the journey!RnB