great work! I really enjoyed it. How did you record it? -> good quality
have you ever tried playing the chromatic melody (1:58 into the recording) a little lighter / less legato / less pedal (?) (as in 1:45 1:46 where the chromatic notes are marvelous)
the c at 2:24 is already cantato but maybe you could give it even a little bit more what do you think?
same with f at 4:02 should the question mark be bigger / longer? -> then maybe the next chord might sound more definitive (as in "this is the answer to the question")
would it be better to wait a little longer at 4:28? please tell me what you think
Thank you all!hakki, it's a Steinway D - recorded professionally, so I'm glad the sound came out nicely Ishay