does this contain a parallel fifth and octave
is it considered incorrect in the context of traditional part-writing rules?
he analysed the chords in every single bach cantata trying to find a consecutive 5th, and of course he didn't find one! we were all like omg...(the concept of analysing over 200 cantatas freaked us out!)
He might have done so.But he might not. The only way to prove him wrong is for you to try it yourself. I say go for it!