ok here my thoughts:
1)ok
2) much more emphasis should be placed on the dynamics. The agitato part was mf at best. Play it forte. After that comes even piu forte and then it declines slowly until it rises again in the arpeggio part.
Additionally, imo, i would hold the left hand octaves in the agitato part on page 2 a little longer while bringing out the accent in the laft hand figure (this returns later in the scherzando part).
The piu f part could be played a little more brilliantly.
3)i would consider playing it a little slower and more expressive
4)See above, brilliance, dynamics and pedalling could be improved.
5)ok
6)so many wrong notes

, i had a hard time listening, but still you can play through it, just practice even more. Increase speed and emotion.
I'm working on it aswell at the moment and while i have the piece ready in my mind i still cannot play further than part 4. Yet i'm somewhat obsessed with it (it's so beatiful) and hope to have it up to speed in maybe two months.
Please post a recording once you feel major improvement.
Best regards