I admire your courage for posting your playing...but in all honesty, this performance is totally unrecognizable.
It's obviously a very difficult piece...this is the kind of piece professionals struggle with...but the rhythm is almost completely incomprehensible and about 60% of the notes are wrong.
Have you heard a recording of the piece?
If I were you I'd practice the piece very slowly, with metronome, hands seperately. Pay attention to rhythm, and don't speed it up until you're rhythm is perfect at a snail's pace. Keep in mind that great pianists like Berezovsky, Arrau, Cziffra play it in about 2:00-2:10 range (which is plenty fast). Of the few people who play it in under two minutes, Lazar Berman is the only one who can really pull it off convincingly.