I'm assuming you posted this in order to hear reactions to your playing and interpretation, right? I'm also assuming you're an amateur, right? A very talented and gifted one, but certainly not ready for the professional stage. The main fault I find in this performance is a steady unity of tempo. I think, in general, it's a little slow, but I've heard it played at your tempo by wonderful musicians who really brought out the "appassionato" element of the piece. You are going to be surprised when you go over it with a metronome, in bits and pieces, how much you slow down, speed up, skip rests, etc. (e.g. The desending scale in meas. 47 and again in the reprise has to be at the EXACT tempo of the following episode.) the whole movement will take on another character when you really feel the constant pulse throughout.
You've got the notes down, which deserves compliment in of itself. Now I think you need to give a bit more appassionato to the piece. I would have liked to hear more in dynamic contrasts. There are a lot of ff and pp in this piece. You are being a bit gentle with the storm, I'd like to be knocked off my feet by it. I also think you need a bit more rhythmic decisiveness, especially with dotted figures. The tempo you have chosen is not problematic, but rather you need you bring out the character of the piece within the tempo.
Nicely played. I liked some of your intentions throughout the piece (and I appreciate you trying to play it differently every time), but there are some that I think simply shouldn't be. For instance, that accentuation of certain LH notes in the 2nd subject of the exposition (in A-flat major). That section is marked pp and dolce, and the way you played it is the exact opposite! (I think you can have a bit more scope for agitation in the development, but nonetheless don't bring out, let alone accent, those LH chords!) After that, no accents in the descending scale that follows.And as has been mentioned, you need to tighten up your rhythm. The first 2 lines catch a lot of people out - barely anyone gets it right the first time! Remember that the small note is essentially dotted - it's a semiquaver (or sixteenth note), but you played it like a quaver (or eight note) every time! Also note that the last note of the phrase is only a crotchet (or quarter note) - doesn't have to be precisely that if you like, but don't hold onto it too long either!The first ritard starts in bar 12, not sooner. Also, make sure the rests aren't too short. It's better to make the rests too long than too short - it gives the music more room to breathe and grow.I assume you know that the coda is piu allegro? Anyway, yes, as has also been mentioned, follow the dynamic markings more closely. For example, after the chords in the coda, the melody starts out piano. It'll give you more scope for a dramatic build up too.Otherwise, very nice really! It's far from an easy piece to play...
Thanks for the lengthy response Prongated.
But in that same section I don't get what you are saying about me accenting the left hand certain notes. I do know I played with more volume in melody r.h. than was written. Guess it just felt correct personally.
The coda being pie allegro? I did play it much faster than the tempo of the piece in general, so felt that was fine.
Do you know there is no pedal marking until measure 124? Who plays it with that marking? Not many that I found. So it may be your opinion it is ok to ignore certain markings and not others, which is fine with me as you can see by my playing .
To me, even though there is no retard right before the exposition in A flat, it really begs of one.
I mean, if you think about it, no-one in that century or previously, except Chopin, ever came close to writing down exactly the sort of pedalling the composer's after. But, if you like...
On this, can you direct me to a link as I am most interested in this information. I couldn't find it when I looked some time ago. thanks!
Link? What link? Just look through the works of Beethoven, Schumann, Brahms, Haydn, Mozart, Liszt...and compare with how much pedal marking Chopin put in his music. Chopin pretty much tried to indicate how one should pedal in his work - it showed some interesting pedalling in certain works, although many just don't work.If you really have to read it from a book, then maybe you can try Jim Samson's books on Chopin's works.