Hi Noah. Great job! Lots of beautiful moments and a nice sense of direction. I really enjoyed it. A lot of nice ideas here.
A couple of thoughts
1 - I think you could have developed it more. The material was good so it deserved more attention. However, I understand that you might have wanted to keep it short since its a prelude.
2 - I felt that the embellishments on the melodic material were a bit contrived/forced. They didn't add to the melody but rather covered it up in my opinion. Think about it like this: A cake is bland without frosting (USUALLY). A good, high quality frosting (like buttercream haha) ENHANCES the overall experience in eating the cake. The cake and frosting become one, essentially. But with a lame, artificial-esque frosting; the cake kind of just gets drowned in it. The frosting is now a cheap additive rather than an essential part to the cake's success. This is how I felt with your runs on the melody. They didn't extend the melodic idea but rather drowned it out.
Conclusion: You have a real talent for this, Noah! I hope these comments don't discourage you. Please, keep composing and creating beauty for the world. We're kind of low on it

. I'm looking forward to your next piece!
- AJ