Improv no. 6 my favorite - do you have an opinion?

[panolof]

Life is tough
Life is easy
What is the point in trying if everything is not our own choice? We have genes from our parents - Being good at maths; we grow up in different environments - being a wealthy white male(therefore less Crime - more educated, more money, better lawyers)
I dedicate this improv - my favorite to date - to a girl - Jemma; when a girl gives a guy goosebumps; when a girl makes it feel like there's no other worry in the world; when a girl wakes up at 5:30 and a guy also does; when a girl imrpovises to a picture of the sea and a guy also does on the same day at different times and unknowingly - fate?
There's some hope in my life, I want to improve, there's a need for it.

When a girl helps a guy find his feet on their second week together.
This is bliss, this is peace, this is love.

"A Blue Day At The Sea"
Dedicated to a girl whose helped me out of a dark corner