It was late just before going to bed when I wrote last night. So a bit less at a knee-jerk pace.
The original video:- I did not necessarily see it for any age group, therefore not necessarily for children. Plenty of adults and teens don't have the basics of reading. I didn't consider age, period.
- Aesthetically I was drawn to the drawings. I liked the texture of the pencil lines, the beauty of the drawings. It made me watch several times over. If I had needed to learn this information, these aesthetics would make a difference.
- It was a good pace for learning. Basic information was presented in a simple way, and a repeated a number of different ways, which helps retain that information. "not too much" and "not clutter" (a point made in the PowerPoint video btw).
- It built from one thing to the next in a way that made sense. That made all of it easy to remember.
If I were to want to use this video as a study tool, I could easily go to a section I want to reinforce. It was all presented with clarity, simplicity, and in a calm manner that allows for concentration.
2. For the content. "bass" with the fish. That part definitely helps you remember the spelling of "bass" because of the repetition, and the striking humourous thing with the picture. However, it also reinforces forever pronouncing it the wrong way.

It's like "don't think of a pink elephant." If you're told not to do something, that's what you'll remember, and end up doing. b) The reader has to be familiar with that fish. c) The reader must be an English speaker, who is familiar with that fish.
- I've already pointed out the weakness of "how to draw the bass clef". It's position on the staff itself is an integral part of that clef. In fact, in the whole video, the beginning dot isn't quite where it should be. Since that dot is on the F line, this is a big deal. It's hard to copy how to draw something by going from screen to paper. That said, is it even necessary to learn to draw the bass clef, in order to read music on the bass clef?
- Personally I don't like the use of memnonics such as .... well, I've forgotten it already. I know there are cows eating grass. I do know the lines and spaces, so I'd have to work backward, which is pointless. Even if memnonics work for you, you still have to chant the whole darn thing in order to get at the note name of the 5th line. But if you like memnonics, it is presented in an easy to follow manner.
3. About whether to teach reading music through this kind of approach in the first place: I tend to be with Lostinidlewonder on that one. I have been studying with a teacher for a number of years now who has looked deeply into the nature of what reading piano music actually is, and from there has developed his way of teaching it in stages. Because of that information, which has convinced me, I wouldn't do it in the way it's done in the video. But then, I wouldn't do it in the way it's commonly presented in books either. The video may be a step up from the books.
So these are my thoughts, written out. In terms of the OP, maybe he or she will show up at some point and that would be cool.
