Hey ted,
Listened to the first 3-4 minutes multiple times. I really liked what you were doing harmonically, if my ear is right you were sometimes playing a blues scale over some really dissonant chords ins in the left hand, maybe the scale was diminished/melodicminor more often? I don’t have a piano in front of me so I’d check if I did. As you can tell my ear training is not where it needs to be but I can still say that harmonically it was interesting to me personally.
However I was trying to listen as an average listener, cause from the point of view of a classical composer, they would say this is interesting. I’ve been going through the process of putting my music out there on Spotify, iTunes, submitting to blogs, etc. Perhaps you might do the same, or perhaps you are happy submitting to this forum and sharing with friends. Personally I’m trying to make music that is accessible to everybody, specifically listeners that haven’t really been exposed to jazz or classical. You might not care what these kinds of people think but I thought I’d say that before I went it to other thoughts cause that’s the context of what comes after..
Seriously the things you do harmonically are really interesting and I haven’t heard before (or at least cannot recognize). The more and more I listen to it I like it. But I thought I’d share my very first impression, because I think that captured more closely what your typical average joe listening to it. Initially I was thinking “ok where is this going, I don’t feel it” in the same way I hear some people say about modern classical music. The problem is I’m writing this now on listen 3-4 and I actually think I understand what you’re trying to do and am enjoying it more, but I suspect average joe on his first listen (and in 21st century joe is only going to give it one listen for a brief time before moving on if he cannot get into the listening exerpeience) needs some kind of more regular pulse.
I’m saying this cause I think my music has the same problem. While I think this could be a respectable piece of classical composition, average joe will not care. Like I listen to your improvisation now and I think the opening is cool, but I think average joe needs something that he can understand right away and maybe a steady danceable pulse for him to like it. This has that pianistic sense of rhythm, but it won’t make you want to get up and dance. It’s not easy to get into for average joe. Like I listen to Phillip glass, one of the most successful modern composers, and my head starts nodding (like you see in those rap videos) within the first seconds of listening to those Etudes. I think it’s possible to get into with that pianistic rhythm and not danceable but still accessible to average joe (albeit less so) for example the piano solo opening in grandfathers waltz (Evans).
Just my 2 cents. Things I’ve been thinking about for my own music having similar issues, I’m trying to move my music in that direction. But seriously back in my college/high school days if you had put this out as a classical piano solo compositionand I was looking for repertoire to put on a program, I would have seriously considered putting this on my competition/recital program, especially if it was shorter like 3-4 minutes.
Edit: also I think you should consider published call of thousand isles on spotify, etc. I think average joe would be able to get into that easier because of the runs, consonant harmony, sense of rhythm, ect. I like your music, it gets a good response on this forum, I’m curious what a broader audience would think. Maybe I’m off base on my earlier assessment, it’s basically what I’ve been thinking about my music. I thought it applied more to this improvisation than thousand isles (that seems to have been more of a finished work) but even that one, I wonder if joe can really, easily get into it in a manner that a Spotify algorithm or pandora algorithm would sense user engagement/ listening and want to add it to users recommendations.
I’m starting to care more what average joe thinks about my music (opposed to before where it was classical competition judges, professors, other piano students), you may not care. If so then I suppose much of this comment does apply but I think if you actually published your music on those platforms you would care a bit possibly. I suspect we are in different points/places in our lives so you might not care.
TLDR: I think your music would do very, very well in the context of the concert stage in a traditional classical piano context, but I wonder how well it’d do in the medium of music streaming. If you were targeting those platforms, would it affect what you would be putting out?