Nicely done!!!!

A few suggestions...note these are ONLY suggestions and im not used to doing this so I might not make any sense, ignore me if you wish......
- phrasing,let it breath more,
- more pianissimo in beginning section and last few bars, l.h. more in the background
-bar 13, a bit more emphasis the a flat, also bar 15 with the b flat, and similar places
well done on this!!!!
