I did this at school some days ago in the piano room. I know near the end i speeded up the tempo a bit.If there is anything wrong please tell me.Any advice to improve.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OaxMH6wBm0A
Oooooh the memories I remember playing this piece waaaaay back, it was like my first piece with a teacher, 5-6 years ago. Was fun hearing
Well, I watched the video. Did you practice this with a metronome? It sounds somewhat midi- I would try playing it more freely, more expressively. Try to make some variations in the repeats of the theme. The middle section- are you using the pedal? Try to make it sound smoother, and bring out the lines more. Also, it needs to be faster overall, I think. Your dynamics seemed static as well, but that was probably just the recording.Hope this helps!