sounds like you're playing on a play piano and the last chord of each run at the beginning seems it will shatter the thing. you need a bose or steinway. the treble on that piano is toyish. it doesn't match your playing.
i lik eyour passion. aren't there a few wrong notes right before the transition to major keys. why do you slow down there so much? oh well, i like what you are doing musically - it's jsut all a bit too loud. maybe it's the recording.
you are crashy at the end even more than at the beginning. i would 'pull' back dynamically - but not speed-wise. make your forte and double forte distinguishable. lighten up in the right hand when you have fast passages and you'll find the fast notes really easy to play.
you're a beethovenian. i think you'll go far. that's in my humble opinion (and i'm a beethoven lover, too). say, i was reading a book on project gutenberg you might enjoy. will try to get the title. it goes into beethoven's life.
i thought you would literally kill the piano with those last two chords. you obviously have strength. no need to prove this to anyone. i think you have it - now just pull back a little. make your hands a little more flat and play same speed - dynamics more contrasted (all the shadings - and consistency with them as you have with your speed).