i hope you can help..

[rockwell]

hi there this is my first post on this site.my name is carl and im a niteclub dj and im starting to get into producing dance music with reason software -i have recently found  that to make really good dance music i needed more keyboard/piano lessons than the few i have existed on and at the age of 32 gone back to lessons.
im working on a project at the mo(a cover of a really popular tune-well,only popular if youve been to alot of raves at 3 in the morning!!!)and it has a simple(simple to you lot anyway!!) keyboard riff and i was hoping you would listen to it and work it out for me,any help would me massively appreciated.just give it a listen.
i will try to find a site to upload it to,untill then i would love to hear from you(especially on msn chat).here are my emails.
sythlord@hotmail.co.uk
music-images@lycos.com

love to hear from you,thank you carl




 

[rockwell]

https://www.badongo.com/file/699192

click the download box

[donjuan]

hahaha.. then the pop tart guy goes, BAAAAAAAAMMMMM!!!!

right now it kind of reminds me of this:
https://www.homestarrunner.com/sbemail45.html

i dont understand the 'love is paradise' repetition and the plasma cannon blasts..

why dont you start by saying 'love is hell' or something like that and then halfway through, say 'love is love' or something ambiguous like that, and then at the very end, say 'love is paradise'

cuz right now, it's the same all the way through from beginning to end, and I need a lot of LSD for this music to do anything for me.