Cascata - My composition

[pianochild]

Hi this is my composition Cascata (Waterfalls)

Comments Welcome!

[counterpoint]

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Theres no Video "Cascata" visible

[pianochild]

Sorry, ther it will work now

[counterpoint]

Yes, now its working. Thanks 

[pianochild]

so what do you think?

[counterpoint]

I'm a little confused by the title of your piece, because there is not much, which resembles to a waterfall. For my ears, it sounds like a sort of greek dance.

Unfortunately the sound of the recording is very distorted and harsh. Perhaps it sounded much nicer in real than it sounds in the recording   

[pianochild]

yes, it does sound better, you can barely hear it really, + i was using my digital where a real piano would of sounded better and the pedal didnt work that well either.

[instromp]

Umm it kinda has a russian theme in there i think, but it sounds nice the sound quality made it hard to actually hear... but it doesnt resemble a waterfall to me.Waterfalls are big,powerful,flowing forces of nature.

[pianochild]

Whell to me it sort of has a story, like a journey of a raindrop, it starts in the streams to the river, and then the big loud part at the end (sounds loud when you hear it properlly) is finally the waterfall, the big loud  crescendos. Mabye i should call it journey of a raindrop, but i dont think it sounds russian, mabye its the quality ( I did it on a webcam!!), it is kind of like a sonata at the start.

[instromp]

Whell to me it sort of has a story, like a journey of a raindrop, it starts in the streams to the river, and then the big loud part at the end (sounds loud when you hear it properlly) is finally the waterfall, the big loud  crescendos. Mabye i should call it journey of a raindrop, but i dont think it sounds russian, mabye its the quality ( I did it on a webcam!!), it is kind of like a sonata at the start.

Or even "Raindrop into a Waterfall" 

[pianochild]

Yes, thats the inpression i was trying to make, thankyou!