Hi David, quite enjoyable to listen to . What a first impression to give us, your first post ever being a beautiful rendition of a loved Bach invention. Welcome, and thanks !
very nice how long are you playing alreadY?
Recordign sound is very nice. In my Urtext edition I have several trills. Why you don't play them? Sounds much better with those ornaments!
I'm not trying to argue with the Urtext but for me the mordants and trills mostly just get in the way of what I'm trying to do with the piece.
First thing I noticed is that you seem to start a slightly slow tempo and rev it up after a couple of bars. This makes it sound slightly cautious at the start, and I'm not sure if I would like to start the piece in that character.The second thing is that i've noticed that you've chosen to pay the semi-quaver lines slightly stacato, or at least marcato. Is there a reason for this? I am currently trying to play the semiquaver lines slighly lagato, but crisp, in contrast to the quavers that carry the main subject. It's good that i you have provided me with a reference -- an alternative way of expressing the figures in the invention.
Yes, the tempo is a bit uneven and this is not always intentional. I need to work on this.About the slightly staccato sixteenths, this is probably a result of listening to too much Glenn Gould. But actually, I do think it helps to contrast the lines.
The main subject alternates jumps and appoggiaturas, therefore must be alternately staccato and legato-- do you agree? So the countersubject/filigree sixteenths should stand apart with an in-between portamento phrasing.