i could hear the ocean - but i didn't hear the 'waves' as much as i'd like. i'd like to hear it lead up to a climax. it started too loud, imo. i'd play it with the lid down and work your way up to the sound. the lid down (or halfway down) will help you a bit and make it more dramatic.
(i couldn't play this piece in a million years - i don't think - so please don't take this crit as anything major).
you have the 'con fuoco' part down extremely well. i like the impetus to it! and, i agree with dumass that if you do not hesitate before the melody notes - then the other spot in the piece where you play the melody with no hesitation - will meld.