First, do NOT apologize, you played hardly any wrong notes (think of how many you played right!!). That is fabulous--you are on your way!
Your second movement is lovely. You hit your stride in the "forte" section and the long line of trills--beautiful. My suggestion would be to think about how you want the first passages to sound--right now they seem not
pp, but
mf (could be the recording), a little like a statement of "OK, here are the descending triplet scales..." and not enough of Beethoven's
espressivo--to me this is a hushed, suspended, anticipatory melody, almost too beautiful to be real, floating down from heaven (and I am not even religious!). I think it is a preamble to a prayer, a pleading which is embodied in the melody after the trills, and which continues until, once again--the hushed anticipation of the finale, then the sudden outburst of pure joy! (Sorry to be so verbose, but this is one of my favorites.

) I always like to think in terms of metaphor--how about "floating" for those descending scales?
Your finale is great!--infectiously energetic--got me singing along. Your clarity is wonderful, and don't think I don't appreciate those insane runs Beethoven writes with all those differing groups of notes--triplets here, quadruplets there, a duplet or two thrown in--you nailed them.
GREAT!

Teresa