Definitely much improved! And yet one still feels you can go deeper into the music. The ending is wild but can be better paced I think, and perhaps the allegro sections can be just one hair slower, with breathing instead of run-on-sentences, and that will give you more room to maneuver the speeding-up section.
There are much more contrasts in this recording than the last, and overall much stronger! I'm impressed that you did it from memory.
Walter Ramsey