I feel the electricity dies down at the very end,
Bit static.
soliloquy - you want a faster tempo? i think it has a sort of 'hard start' beginning by the way it is written. if you don't play the rhythms correctly - then you get canned for that. i think the motion (as it gets going) becomes less and less static - and builds upon each element with more motion. it's like you ARE starting with less (as the composer wrote less to work with at the beginning) and going to more, imo.