Hi. It´s nice overall, I would just sugest to work more on evenness on the notes. specialy on Some of the ornaments it gets a little messed up. sometimes you rush it a bit, I would like to hear all the notes very clearly. You might work on the second part, specialy the doble notes about 1:22 and the trill on 1:16. I woul like to listen to it in a better instrument, anyway.
This is a very nice piece. I have posted a version of it here some time ago. Didn´t got much repplies though... I like this piece a lot, but it seems most people ´round here don´t care very much about it.

Here is the link anyway, if you want to take a look at it. And critique, if you like to!
https://www.pianostreet.com/smf/index.php/topic,20483.0.htmlBtw, notice how in my version, the last chord changes to a major chord instead of the minor one you did. There are diferent editions fo this music. I´m not shure which one is the most acurate, but anyway, I love the last chord as a Major chord, so I did it that way.