I adore this piece, my favourite Cziffra transcription.
Very technically accomplished performance, all the notes are there, but of course with Cziffra having god-like facility, he can play the runs and octaves with more speed and 'finesse', but he is Cziffra

This is just a great and moving performance, great sense of rubato and voicing, all I can advise is that you play it more and with time you will develop a more individual interpretation, this great music can be played many ways.
Have you heard Uematsu's performance of this piece?