finally had time to listen to this. you must be really happy! i think you play well.since you asked for crit - i'll just give a mite. i really liked the contrast of the white/black suits. but, the pianos - imo - were too close together. i like to see them actually facing one another. don't know why - although perhaps i thought the sound would carry from one less than another (namely the secondo part would be facing more towards the wall). i have no idea if this is auditorially better though - if the sound bounces off the wall and actually makes it louder. sound techs know, i guess.last comment : because you are such a good listener - being on the other side would allow you to look up - rather than at your teacher's keyboard.