Typically people have trouble making the tempo even - but this is actually the opposite. A little too 'square.' I'd actually say something about less involvement with dynamics and more to 'tone quality' with much softer grades of dynamics. More subtle. You have a really great command at the piano and i think you will and are the right kind of person to play beethoven. You grasp the idea of where the music is going and you don't hesitate to give it that commanding aspect. Maybe now - to find the feminine side. Just a tiny bit. Also, what was told to me, 'highly respect rests in beethoven.' They are as important to 'phrase' as the phrases themselves. Sort of in equal proportions but not square. Just what seems to be enough pause. As though you have a dialogue going on with a philosopher and take some pauses to thought.You really inspire me to want to play this sonata. I have not played any of the latter sonatas and this will be my first. I'm printing it out and have two other books (schnabel and verlag) to compare fingerings with. Schnabel is ok on some things - but sometimes he does not take advantage of the stuff Bach did - slide down the fifth finger from a sharp to a natural with pinky or thumb on sharp to thumb on white note - and it really makes playing much less worrisome and more fun. Fingering is really a big part of having fun in Beethoven and is what helped me finally learn the Waldstein several years ago. I had tried all the 'book fingering' but came up with some fingering of my own that made it 'work' in some of the more difficult sections. Yours sounds like you worked all that out very easily.Sometimes, for my own inspiration - i'd read something philosophic that kind of makes you think of the dialogue that beethoven might have had. He often asked questions to himself, i think, and then 'worked it out.' It's like he's having this huge dinner table conversation with himself. The part in page two that goes into repeated chords reminds me of his penchant for going for a walk in nature to work things out. This is fairly even tempoed and i like what you did there. Maybe just the beginning and ending more 'philosophical.'