I like this more than your FI and bumble bee. As for the pedal: less would definitely be more, especially in the descending passages. Often these runs are disappearing into an indefinite murmur. I understand the left hand part as a very expressive melody as well as the right hand, Chopin says "legatissimo". Then you might also work on getting the dotted eighth-sixteenth rhythm more correctly, of course this problem occurs because of the jumps, for instance in m. 2 and 4, one of the difficulties of this etude.