bernard, the problem you are having is that the audition room's standards are very, very high, especially for advanced music such as this. the expectation is that all of the notes are correct, or at very most you make a few minor errors. the primary type of suggestions that people are eliciting when they post in the audition room are about interpretation--nuances, not major structural issues.
you clearly have a long way to go before this piece is up to that standard. it's hard music, and I won't claim that I can play it, because I can't. the difference is, I know that I can't, but you seem to think that you can.
I'm not trying to be mean here; rather, I want you to understand why others have been so negative when you post. good luck.