Hi M,
Your playing is accurate, crisp, clear, expressive and exciting. I always marvel at your extraordinary technique in playing virtuosic pieces like this. If I had to make one suggestion, it would be in the more lyrical Part B. You've already got the contrasts and shadings there, and it already exudes beauty. But I believe you need to give yourself even more romantic license, bringing a more dramatic ebb and flow, more surge, and more nuances there, as if the melodic line were a soaring Wagnerian operatic aria. Sing that line out loud. Right now it's a bit too tight, like in a corset--it doesn't breathe enough. It needs to be more ultra-romantic in my opinion. But others might disagree. So in the end do what you think is right by Liszt there.