part 1:
the variations around 7:00 I thought could have used more dynamics and more rubato. Generally the piece needed more rubato and more dynamics all around but generally it was very good are around, you had good control technically and musically and your tone was very sweet. Some people play it to much like Handel, some play it to much like Brahms, some people play it like Handel on steroids, but you play it like Brahms-Handel.
part 2:
I liked how you brought out the counter-voices in the variation that ended around 2:24. The following variation I thought could have been more solemn sounding but still very good. the variation on 4:10 had a lot of energy, I was impressed.
part 3:
no suggestions
it was very good and very impressive, just more dynamics and a little more rubato and it would be fantastic. You are a very talented pianist.