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Offline pianoman666

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Original Ragtime Piece
on: July 14, 2009, 04:31:58 AM
two-step ragtime, written July 13, 2009. please tell me what you think.

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Offline makeanote

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Re: Original Ragtime Piece
Reply #1 on: July 14, 2009, 10:32:41 PM
Hi there pianoman!

You follow the style of a ragtime piece quite well after the introduction - although there wasn't much of your piece posted. It would be good to listen to this being played on a real piano by a pianist instead of the sequenced / quantised version. Also, from a compositional point of view, the introduction was quite weak and I didn't think the chromatic run-down helped (check the intervals you use).

I trust this helps.
Ian
 

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