So Bernard.. Section A is better. But still... None really cares for how long you've been practising if you make too many misstakes. It's like being on a test, and finishing after 10 minutes when you have one hour to finish. Then you get the test back, and gets like 55%. Some ppl are like "woho, I only sat there for 10 minutes, and got 55%!!", while some others are "I sat there for almost an hour, but i got my 95%!" Who do you think did best?
Keep playing. and one hand each, in a sloooooow tempo, until you don't miss a single note. Then you play with both hands, even slower, until you play it perfectly. THEN you post it.